Några ändringar/GJ
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loneliness [...] [...] in order +so that we understand how much her father means to her+
loneliness they despair [eller [...] maybe/gj] in order +so that we understand how much her father means to her+


to cheer herself up she starts
to cheer herself up she starts
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dancing a crazy dance
dancing a crazy dance


and? is interrupted? by mrs social worker
and is interrupted by mrs social worker


who starts the first of all the
who starts the first of all the
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attempts to have pippi
attempts to have pippi


rescued from her unconventional? life
rescued from her unconventional life


there should be a [...]
there should be a [murdering?/lek]


[...] and then pippi
dialogue and then pippi


starts dancing again in order
starts dancing again in order
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make her dizzy too mrs social
make her dizzy too mrs social


worker [protests?] in vain
worker protests in vain


they dance and dance until pippi
they dance and dance until pippi