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loneliness [...] | loneliness they despair [eller [...] maybe/gj] in order +so that we understand how much her father means to her+ | ||
to cheer herself up she starts | to cheer herself up she starts | ||
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dancing a crazy dance | dancing a crazy dance | ||
and is interrupted by mrs social worker | |||
who starts the first of all the | who starts the first of all the | ||
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attempts to have pippi | attempts to have pippi | ||
rescued from her unconventional | rescued from her unconventional life | ||
there should be a [ | there should be a [murdering?/lek] | ||
dialogue and then pippi | |||
starts dancing again in order | starts dancing again in order | ||
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make her dizzy too mrs social | make her dizzy too mrs social | ||
worker | worker protests in vain | ||
they dance and dance until pippi | they dance and dance until pippi |